- It's "master" not "mater".
- The transformation from maggot to fly is a metamorphosis, not evolution.
- A populist is a single person. He means populus, latin for population.
- "I believe the populist has accepted the idea of evolution due to the lack of evidence of the contrary." AKA the scientific method.
- It's "doctoral", not "doctorial".
- "By following the steps and research of Darwin my researchers and I can detail the evidence and experiments that Darwin used for his Theory of Evolution." Except that there is shit-tons and decades of additional research beyond that and your documentary would not disprove those.
What kind of professor would even accept this waste of time as a doctoral thesis?
- "By following in Darwins footsteps, I hope to prove..." Oh, good. He starts his research with a foregone conclusion.
- It's "religion", not "region".
- "I just believe there has got to be a better answer than all in compassing evolution."
1. Define "better".
2. An "an" is missing.
3. It's "encompassing", not "in compassing".
- Wouldn't it be way easier to analyze archeological evidence and fossils to find these evolutionary loops? Measuring the beaks of some birds on an isolated island won't cut it.
- If he's interested in biology, why didn't he study biology?
Why can't he double-check his proposal for typos?
Why isn't he familiar with the concept of scientific proof? As an academic he should be.
Which professor is so stupid to accept this destined-to-fail mess as a thesis?
How much of this money will go into bribing a professor into accepting a bird-documentary as a thesis on evolution?