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nuxvomica

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1. I try to follow Ursula K. Le Guin's advice to always have action with dialogue

Reply to SheltieLover (Original post)

Mon May 24, 2021, 11:38 AM

May 2021

But I'll check out the article later. Thanks for posting! I've been playing with an interesting writing tip lately: Never start a sentence with the word "the". Especially the first one in a paragraph. It's not that such sentences are bad but the tip forces you to be more imaginative in sentence structure; basically an anti-laziness remedy.

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Writer's Digest: 4 Tips on Writing Dialogue [View all] SheltieLover May 2021 OP

I try to follow Ursula K. Le Guin's advice to always have action with dialogue nuxvomica May 2021 #1

Excellent tip! SheltieLover May 2021 #2

A related tip... Orrex Jun 2021 #4

I read the short article and I think the tips are useful nuxvomica May 2021 #3

A friend self-published a fantasy novel a few years back Orrex Jun 2021 #5

thank you for this! Chili Jun 2021 #6