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Poetry

cali

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3. thanks. I really like that the reference was clear

Reply to byronius (Reply #2)

Sat Jun 7, 2014, 06:40 AM

Jun 2014

it might not seem it, but that last poem is pretty literal. I have a friend who is a dancer. He travels a lot. I shattered my leg and had to learn to walk again- starting in a pool with a platform floor that could be raised and lowered. I like how the most mundane things can be transformed in poem form.

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I like it. cali Jun 2014 #1

I like your stuff back. Especially your last one. byronius Jun 2014 #2

thanks. I really like that the reference was clear cali Jun 2014 #3

Awesome. Your explanation makes it better. byronius Jun 2014 #4

yes, shattered. what's called a displaced segmental spiral fracture cali Jun 2014 #5

That sounds quite consciousness-altering. byronius Jun 2014 #6

Mmmmm theexwife Jul 2014 #7