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Hawaii

3catwoman3

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2. My health professional background prompts me to suggest...

Reply to TexasTowelie (Original post)

Sat Sep 16, 2017, 01:19 AM

Sep 2017

...adjusting your topic sentence to "untreated strep complications" or the like so readers do not become unnecessarily alarmed, before reading your entire post, that this terrible outcome came from ordinary strep throat that was appropriately treated.

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