Poetry

wyn borkins

(1,109 posts) Mon Jan 24, 2022, 03:24 AM Jan 2022

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Wherein I did indeed set it in play by way
Of irisblue's Cooking & Baking all day
On her tantalizing Breakfast Sunday

Little girl me
Once
Upon a porch stool
Once
I did wait and watch
Once
Finally caught them
Once
Frosty cold were they
Once
Made me smile so bigly
Once
Snowflakes on my tongue
Once
Oh please I beg let me be
Once
Again --- that little girl me

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Re-Posting This Piece (Here) From Yesterday (Original Post) wyn borkins Jan 2022 OP

;-) elleng Jan 2022 #1

Thank You, O'Beacon Of Good Will wyn borkins Jan 2022 #8

Why does it keep saying "once" ? left-of-center2012 Jan 2022 #2

Epimone wyn borkins Jan 2022 #3

Thank you for allowing me murielm99 Jan 2022 #4

And, Thank 'You' For Your Kindness wyn borkins Jan 2022 #6

Lovely poem!!! Karadeniz Jan 2022 #5

Appreciations, And Thank You Most Kindly wyn borkins Jan 2022 #7

elleng

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1. ;-)

Reply to wyn borkins (Original post)

Mon Jan 24, 2022, 03:58 AM

Jan 2022

wyn borkins

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8. Thank You, O'Beacon Of Good Will

Reply to elleng (Reply #1)

Mon Jan 24, 2022, 12:19 PM

Jan 2022

left-of-center2012

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2. Why does it keep saying "once" ?

Reply to wyn borkins (Original post)

Mon Jan 24, 2022, 04:07 AM

Jan 2022

wyn borkins

(1,109 posts)

3. Epimone

Reply to left-of-center2012 (Reply #2)

Mon Jan 24, 2022, 04:38 AM

Jan 2022

A silly rhetorical term for the repetition of a word or phrase, as in:

Once
I epimone(d) to allow me to
Once
Prattle-on down the page
Once
I began, 'twas difficult to
Once
Again --- not continue epimone