When You Smile at the Falling Snow

[bigtree]

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...big snow today, wrote this poem a few years back.

'When You Smile at the Falling Snow'

When you smile at the falling snow,
You're likely remembering joy and beauty
Experienced over a lifetime.

From the very first time your parents
Bundled you up with layers of long underwear;
Woolen trousers and several pairs of socks,
Oversized sweater over a turtleneck,
All crammed inside that impossibly small snowsuit.

You remember that first misshaped snowman
Mixed with dirt and grass, and snot;
More brown than the white ground surrounding it.
Well-dressed in Mother's good scarf you borrowed,
And perfectly natty in Father's old cap.

There's a hastily erected snow fort on the front lawn,
Fully fortified with a neat pile of perfect snowballs,
Smoothed over by stiffening, soaked mittens,
Too precious, maybe too deadly to actually throw.
The fort is everything; only room for friends, and you.

Was there ever a truly safe hill for sledding?
One without the sharp drop into the half-frozen creek?
A sledding hill without that fence at the end,
Or that busy street with cars whizzing by past the curb
Threatening to drown, decapitate, or drive over you?

Soaked to the bone, soaked through seven solid layers.
Stubbornly ignoring frostbitten feet and swollen hands.
Struggling with your sled back up to the top of the hill,
Standing in line behind the big kids, you spot your sister
Shivering from the cold; you're suddenly shivering, too.

I was able to recreate all of that winter magic as an adult;
My own sons, layered and stuffed into impossibly small snowsuits.
We made our own dirty snowmen; sturdy snow forts,
And sledded down unsafe hills, scraping swollen knuckles,
Stubbornly shivering as we stayed too long.

It's snowing and there's a family of deer in my suburban yard;
Taking refuge on the softer land, ground deliberately layered
With the trees' insulating debris and evergreen ground cover.
There's spirit here, they know it's safe from predators,
A perfect place to digest their food and nibble a bit more.

They startle when I open the door to scatter birdseed,
Standing perfectly still, once more, when they hear my voice
Softly reassuring them there's no reason to run away.
They're covered with snow, and one is trying to lick it off of the other.
The snow is falling fast, and I'm smiling again.

Robert Peppers

[MLAA]

1. Lovely poem and beautiful water color.

[In_The_Wind]

2. Thank you

[bigtree]

3. you're welcome, In_The_Wind

...thanks for reading.

[MLAA]

5. I noticed you deleted a reply to me, is it something I said ? 🙂

[bigtree]

6. never!

...I was just trying to give the watercolor artist credit and decided to do it in the op.

[MLAA]

7. 😊

Hoping this more peaceful time will inspire you to write 🙂

[Harker]

8. Touched some fun memories with that!

I'm beginning to appreciate winter much as I did as a child, now that I'm freshly retired.

Up to my knees in places, and my husky daughter Tosca can't wait to drag me around.

Thank you!