A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you.

[Harker]

no fun here

the woods are silent

crows move on

[MLAA]

1. Lovely

[Harker]

2. They'll be back

when the snow tails off a bit and the wind dies down.

[MLAA]

3. You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂

[Harker]

4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.

Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.

[lillypaddle]

5. so ...

moon shimmers

the light is still there

though shadowed

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It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines.

[Harker]

6. A Luna lune... love it!

Keep it up, sensei, and you'll be thinking them with little or no effort.

[lillypaddle]

8. You do your research

and send me to google.

Wonder what that would be called?

[Harker]

9. I'm not sure.

sunflower

now dried out and black

birdfeeder

[lillypaddle]

10. I have to think about that one

for awhile.

[Harker]

7. And...

brief cloud gaps

shadows are reborn

glare off snow