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Made some changes (Original Post) GreenPartyVoter Jan 2021 OP
Beautiful! SheltieLover Jan 2021 #1
I agree. bif Jan 2021 #3
It looks a bit more defined with your subtle changes lunatica Jan 2021 #2
Gorgeous work! I love especially how masterful your portrayal of trees are, I LiberalLoner Jan 2021 #4
Beautiful light and atmospheric perspective. femmedem Feb 2021 #5
It's perfect now! Beautiful work! LiberalLoner Feb 2021 #6
They're both great. lunatica Feb 2021 #7

SheltieLover

(59,605 posts)
1. Beautiful!
Tue Jan 19, 2021, 07:01 PM
Jan 2021

I think, possibly the house could still use some definition. Maybe outline the roof? Ty for sharing your lovely work!

bif

(23,980 posts)
3. I agree.
Wed Jan 20, 2021, 10:41 AM
Jan 2021

Maybe a little more detail on the house, especially near the edge of the trees? Just my two cents. I think it's beautiful. Makes me want to be there!

lunatica

(53,410 posts)
2. It looks a bit more defined with your subtle changes
Tue Jan 19, 2021, 09:00 PM
Jan 2021

I really like that you have parts of it looking sharp, like the tops of the buildings, while others look a little less defined. It still has the atmospheric feeling about it so the viewer is aware of the air defining the glow of the light.

LiberalLoner

(10,107 posts)
4. Gorgeous work! I love especially how masterful your portrayal of trees are, I
Mon Jan 25, 2021, 05:44 AM
Jan 2021

Struggle with painting trees and I would be so happy if I could do as well as you do!

The feeling of light in this painting is beautiful, it feels like such a bright summer day!

You did such a good job with the composition as well. Putting the main subject in the middle can be risky but you made it work by placing counterpoints to each side so the painting has wonderful flow!

femmedem

(8,444 posts)
5. Beautiful light and atmospheric perspective.
Sun Feb 14, 2021, 05:18 PM
Feb 2021

I wouldn't change a thing or add any more definition. That house is quite a distance from the viewer and the way it's painted now, it's bathed in light. If you added any more details you would risk losing the light and the sense of distance.

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